"Broken Radiator"
Posted on: March 17, 2009 - 11:45am
DtotheJtotheM
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"Broken Radiator"
Dust feeds the air and disappears into the light shining through the glass,
This is the corner where I go to cry and think about things that are broken,
You're so cold that my tears have encrusted as ice upon my broken smile.
Sometimes when the darkness descends I am still there, but you are not,
I remember the love in my head only, because that's where it happened,
And the shadows are so beautiful when you're looking through a black hole.
The radiator has long since died with many things that I have broken,
The cold is unbearable, especially when your memory gives such wonderful head,
But you're not touching my skin anymore, no, no, no, not anymore..
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This is a poem I wrote about getting over a previous relationship I was in that although had been the best six months of my life, it being a long-distance relationship meant that it was difficult, and we eventually ended it. It affects me to this day, though not as much. Anyways, I hope you like this poem!
This is the corner where I go to cry and think about things that are broken,
You're so cold that my tears have encrusted as ice upon my broken smile.
Sometimes when the darkness descends I am still there, but you are not,
I remember the love in my head only, because that's where it happened,
And the shadows are so beautiful when you're looking through a black hole.
The radiator has long since died with many things that I have broken,
The cold is unbearable, especially when your memory gives such wonderful head,
But you're not touching my skin anymore, no, no, no, not anymore..
-
This is a poem I wrote about getting over a previous relationship I was in that although had been the best six months of my life, it being a long-distance relationship meant that it was difficult, and we eventually ended it. It affects me to this day, though not as much. Anyways, I hope you like this poem!
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You said you'd wish upon that star...
This is brilliant! I wish I could write poetry like this! I've read published ones that aren't this good..
Kind of rings a few bells for me, probably for a lot of people even though everyones experiences are a bit different.. Anyway its a great poem, definitely stirs some emotions :)
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